写作思路：根据题目要求，可以以“随着网络的普及，网上购物日渐流行”作为背景，写一件自己网购的事，最后对网购进行评价，正文：With the popularity of the Internet, online shopping has become increasingly popular, and I have also learned online shopping.随着网络的普及，网上购物日渐流行，我也学起了网购。I thought the pencil box I bought online the day before yesterday had to wait until the day after tomorrow, but I didn't expect the pencil box to arrive today. Although it has only one floor, it has five organs, which is very interesting.我本以为前天在网上买的铅笔盒，需要等到大后天才到，没想到今天铅笔盒就到了，它虽然只有一层，但它有五个机关，特别有趣。Open the pencil case, push the switch, and a ruler appears. Press the eraser button, and a small box pops out with an eraser inside.打开笔盒，推一下开关，一把尺就这样出现了。按一下eraser按钮，一个小盒子就跳出来了，里面还有一块橡皮。Online shopping is really convenient and cheap. You can enjoy shopping without going out. It's better to move than to act. Try it!网上购物真是既方便又便宜，不必出门就可以享受购物的乐趣。心动不如行动，你也试试吧！
望采纳，谢谢。 With the development of Internet, more and more people tend to shop on the Internet.Online shopping has provided some benefits for us, but it also has some disadvantages at the same time.随着互联网的发展，越来越多的人喜欢在网上购物。网购给我们带来了一些好处，但是它同时也有一些缺点。For one thing, online shopping has brought some convenience for consumers.Instead of going one shop to another, people can choose and buy all kinds of commodities they like as long as they click the mouse gently.This is not only a better choice for the old who do not have enough energy to go outside but also a great convenience for those who have no time to go shopping in person.In addition, consumers have more choices and can do some comparison when they are shopping on the Internet.They can glance over various commodities in all shapes, sizes and colors and decided to buy or not.Furthermore, online shopping has made a great contribution to the development of express delivery industry.一方面，网上购物给消费者带来了一些方便。人们不再是逛一个个店，人们只需要轻轻点鼠标就可以选择购买他们想要的商品。这不仅对没有精力外出的老人来说是一个更好的选择，而且对那些没有时间独自出去购物的人来说也很方便。另外，消费者在网上购物的时候有更多的选择，也可以多做对比。他们可以浏览各种商品的所有型号，尺寸，颜色然后决定要不要买。另外，网上购物对快递行业的发展做出了很大的贡献。However, for another, shopping on the Internet also has some shortcomings.Firstly, those who shop on the Internet can’t try the goods before they buy.Sometimes, the real goods are not the same as the goods they see on the Internet.Secondly, some shops on the Internet are dishonest and they would not deliver the goods after paying.And if this situation happens, the consumers would find nowhere to complain and never pull out the money any longer.然而，另一方面，网上购物也有一些缺点。首先，那些在网上购物的人不能够在买之前试一下商品。有时候，食物和我们在网上看到的物品是不一样的。其次，网上有的店是不诚实的，付款后他们不会发货。如果发生了这种情况，消费者就会找不到地方抱怨，就拿不回钱了。Therefore, we should pay more attention when shopping on the Internet.因此，当我们网购的时候应该多注意。 ——来自{yh3057}英语牛人团

写作思路：首先说一说网购的好处，比如省时省力，方便快捷，商品的范围广，品种全，样式多。然后在说一下网购的弊端，比如盗图现象，以假乱真，以次充好现象等等。正文：Online shopping saves time, effort and money. They don't have to drag their tired bodies through the streets of the city on precious weekends, and they don't have to wander in the crowded commercial streets under the scorching sun and drizzle.网购省时省力省钱，他们不用在宝贵周末拖着疲惫不堪的身躯穿梭在都市的大街小巷，不用顶着烈日沐着细雨游荡在人头攒动的商业街。It's convenient and fast. When you want to buy something, you don't have to wait until the weekend. You don't have to find someone to accompany you everywhere. You can easily do it by moving your fingers.方便快捷，想买东西的时侯不用特意等到周末，不用四处找人陪，自己动动手指轻松搞定。One of the advantages of online shopping is the wide range of goods, complete varieties and many styles. As long as you want things are possible to buy, what style of clothes, gifts everything.网上购物的一大优势就是商品的范围广，品种全，样式多。只要你想要的东西都有可能买的到，什么风格的衣服，礼物应有尽有。Online shopping is a double-edged sword, which not only provides consumers with convenient and fast shopping methods, but also brings unnecessary troubles to consumers.网购是把双刃剑，给消费者提供了方便快捷的购物方式的同时也给消费者带来了不必要的困扰。Online shopping because you can't see the actual goods, sometimes the things you buy are not what you want. For example, clothes bought online have color difference, some sizes are not allowed, and the quality is guaranteed.网上购物因为看不到实际商品，有时候买回来的东西并不是自己想要的。比如衣服吧，在网上买衣服有色差，有的尺码也不准，质量也难以保证。Integrity and fake goods are prominent problems in online shopping. The phenomenon of stealing pictures, confusing fake goods with real ones and shoddy goods with good ones is serious.诚信问题和假货问题是网购中比较突出的问题，盗图现象，以假乱真，以次充好现象严重。

There are lots of advantages of on-line shopping. Firstly,you can enjoy the convenience of on-line shopping:surf the internet and order your things easily.Secondly,you can search as much information as you can which normal couldn't do. What's more, lots of people love to pursue the fashion and then they choose on-line shopping:"."网购有许多便利之处。首先，你可以享受网购的便捷，浏览因特网订购你需要的东西。其次，可以搜索一些平常不常见的物品。此外，许多人喜欢潮流事物，他们会更愿意选择网购。 Advantages: easy to use, cheaper than the store, there are a lot of styles.save money and time 便于操作、比实体店便宜、款式多、节省时间和金钱
There are lots of advantages of on-line shopping. Firstly,you can enjoy the convenience of on-line shopping:surf the internet and order your things easily.Secondly,you can search as much information as you can which normal couldn't do. What's more, lots of people love to pursue the fashion and then they choose on-line shopping:"."网购有许多便利之处。首先，你可以享受网购的便捷，浏览因特网订购你需要的东西。其次，可以搜索一些平常不常见的物品。此外，许多人喜欢潮流事物，他们会更愿意选择网购。
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping on line.
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一、写作思路这是一道辨析题，所以内容需要全面，既包括网购的好处，也包括网购的坏处，形成对比。开头可以直接带出话题，比如我认为网购的利弊主要体现在这几个方面，中间展开好处和坏处，各列举一下观点，结尾提出关于网购的建议。二、双语写作范文参考题目：网购的利弊我认为网购的好处主要有：一是可以节约时间；二是可以以低价买到市场上同类的产品；三是还可以买到一些在实体商店不易买到的东西。我认为网购的最大缺点就是：你在下购买决策之前是看不到实物的，只能通过网络上的间接信息对它产生了解。建议网购的时候尽量挑有信誉的商店买，节省信息收集时间，尽量买自己熟悉和了解的东西。Advantages and disadvantages of online shoppingI think the main advantages of online shopping are: first, it can save time; Second, you can buy similar products in the market at a low price; Third, you can also buy some things that are not easy to buy in physical stores.I think the biggest disadvantage of online shopping is that you can't see the real object before making a purchase decision. You can only understand it through the indirect information on the network.It is suggested that when shopping online, try to choose reputable stores to buy, save information collection time, and try to buy things you are familiar with and understand.三、双语写作模板参考网购的利弊我认为网购的好处主要有：一是..............二是................三是..............我认为网购的最大缺点就是：................建议网购的时候尽量..........................Advantages and disadvantages of online shoppingI think the main advantages of online shopping are: first..........Second...... Third.....I think the biggest disadvantage of online shopping is that ..............It is suggested that when shopping online, try to ................
写作思路：写出网购的优点和缺点，对于优点和缺点，分开举例说明。正文：With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers,shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life.译文：随着互联网的发展和计算机的普及，网上购物已经成为我们生活中的一个普遍的问题。Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.译文：在这里，消费者可以买到他们所需要的一切。Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.译文：网上购物有很多好处，其中最重要的也许是它的方便。People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.译文：人们不必浪费大量的精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个选择他们喜欢的商品。This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person.译文：这对于那些不能亲自去商店的老人、病人和忙碌的人来说尤其可取。The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet.译文：这些货物在网上的各种形状,大小和颜色都有。All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses.译文：所有他们需要做的是坐在电脑前点击鼠标。The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.译文：他们所订购的商品将及时送到他们的。However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.译文：然而，在互联网上购物也有其缺点。The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally.译文：第一个缺点是消费者看不到商品或者亲自试用。Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.译文：有时候，真正的商品可能不一样，因为他们在电脑上看到的。The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered.译文：其次是一些商店在网上没有注册。They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you.译文：在他们从你得到的钱之后,他们永远不会给你提供任何东西。Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.译文：一旦被欺骗，你会发现你无处可去抱怨。
We talked about the advantages and disadvantages if internet shopping these days. some students think it's very convenience for us to go shopping on the internet. The shop on the line are open for 24 hours a day so we can buy something we want at any time if you like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue. However, some students disagreed with them. we can't see the things while we are shopping. so we are not sure whether they are good or not. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.我们谈论的优点和缺点，如果这些天网上购物。一些学生认为这是非常方便我们去购物在互联网上。这家商店就行了，每天24小时开放，这样我们就可以买东西，我们要在任何时候，如果你喜欢。更重要的是，我们没有必要在队列中等待。 然而，有些学生不同意他们的。我们不能看到的东西，我们在购物的时候。所以我们不知道他们是否是好还是坏。此外，我们与我们的朋友不能享受购物的快乐。

Online shopping 四级作文Online Shopping关于网上购物(Shopping on the Internet)Directions: you are required to write a 150 word essay on the topic Shopping onthe Internet on ANSWER SHEET.1．近来社会上出现网上购物热2．人们对此现象的不同反应3．你对此现象的看法范文一:With the popularity of the Internet, more and morepeople do shopping online. Without going out of their home, they may look forwhatever items they want and pay online only by clicking the mouse. A couple ofdays later, the goods they buy online will be delivered at their frontdoor.As for this new phenomenon, people have differentideas about it. Some think that doing shopping online is time- andenergy-saving. People can buy anything at anytime they like without a computerhooked onto the Internet. They may say good-bye to the exhausting journey ofsearching. While others believe that they cannot touch, smell, or taste whatthey want. They don’t feel certain about their choice. Besides, they doubtwhether the companies will deliver the right items at right time to a rightplace.In my opinion, shopping online is convenient indeed.But we should be very careful when we decide which item to buy and with companyis trustworthy. Additionally, we should guard against the hackers who intend tosteal our account passwordsWiththe development of technology, online shopping has become popular in people’sdaily life. As many of us might have witnessed, more people are buying productsthrough the Internet. And to facilitate online purchase, stores providepictures of their products together with other illustrations on the websites.Besides, online products range from small items such as clothes and books tolarge ones like computers.Undoubtedly,online shopping has brought us many conveniences. Yet its potential dangers tothe consumer could not be ignored. One possible risk is that consumers mightnot get the exact product they want because the information provided might notbe enough or reliable. For a simple example, a consumer who wants tobuy a pair of shoes might end up getting a pair with desired style but unfitsizes. After all, people have to try themselves when buyingclothes or shoes. Moreover, if consumers do not pay attention to thecredibility of online stores, they might get cheated.Therefore,consumers should firstly be aware of the credibility of an online store.Secondly, people should not jump on the bandwagon because not all onlineshopping brings about convenience. Instead, they have to make their ownjudgment as to the kind of products that could be bought online. Thus, theycould avoid possible trouble caused by inadequate or inaccurateinformation provided by an online store.My views on Online Shopping1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3. 我的建议Nowadays, can we find a person who has notexperienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming intofashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.Online shopping is welcomed by most people due tovarious reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time forpeople who don’t have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can getwhatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut somecosts for those who don’t have much circulating funds. They don’t have to renta house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode.However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face to facedeal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people willlose the fun of bargain.It is undeniable that shopping on the internethas become an irresistible trend in modern society. It’s of great urgency thatwe need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth ofonline shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience ofonline shopping without the concern of being treated.（一）Nowadays with the ever rapid development andincreasingpopularity of the information technology ， shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among theyoungsters.Online shopping has made our daily life moreconvenient and comfortable. For example ，shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the waybetween home and store， so they would be able to concentrate more timeand energy on theiracademic work. The internet has shorten the distance betweenmanufacturers and consumers and thus we can even buy goods in other countries.On the other hand ， lack of the face to face deal makes onlineshopping less reliable and trustworthy. What’ s more the delivery will increasethe risk of items’ damage.In my opinion，shopping on the internet is a irreversible trend. More and more people will beaccustomed to it. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at thesame time we should take some measures to make it perfect.（二）Nowadays,shoppingonline is becoming more and more popular.People begin to buy things they needonline and it makes them have more time and energy.I think it is every easy tobuy things online and there is also many different kinds of things that wecannot find in the real shops. Usually,they are rally fantastic and nice.We mayalso save money because the things shopped online are much cheaper.However,everycoins have two sides. When we are shopping online, we may face much danger.Wemay not find the things is the one which we want or need and sometimes we arealso worried about their qualities.So, it is better for us to pay enough attention to shopping online and makesure that we truly need it when we buy something.（三）Nowdays The world is getting smaller and smallerbecause of the Internet . It plays a more and more importantrole in our daily lives .Many people like shopping online . shoppingonline does help a lot in many aspects . Such as shopping online is much moreconvenient because it can't expend time to shopping in the malls .Internet canprovide choose shopping onling can get something cheap .But shopping onlinebrings a lot ofdisadvantages.Forexample .It is difficult toguaranteethe quclity of goods bough onling . it is not safety to pay online .After all .every coin has two sides .we shouldlearn how to make use of the Internet resources correctly。（四）shoppingon the Internet,or shopping online,is being more and more popular.More and morepeople are using the internet to buy somethings.Why do people use the internetto shop?Some people say that it is more convenient.They can just stay at homeand shop for anythings that they want at any time,day or night. If you want tobuy something on the internet,you need a credit card.You have to type youcredit card number and information on the web site and send it to the storeover internet.But you should pay attention to because every thing has twopoint,shopping online has advantages and disadvantages.补充：With the development of the Internet and thepopularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplacein our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages,of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have towaste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another tochoose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, thesick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods comein all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sitin front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order willbe delivered to them promptly. However, shopping on the Internet also has itsdisadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goodsor try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same aswhat they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shopson the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to youafter they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you havenowhere to go to complain.
Advantages: Will greatly save shopping time, while listening to light music enjoying the fun of shopping online. Moreover, gifts can also be sent to friends you want, directly from the Internet after ordering, you can send to your friend's House.Second, cargo than n. To give you a day's time, you can only visit a dozen stores, but on the Web, you can search hundreds of shops in one hour. Find style is the same, while the most expensive of that House, you can place an order.DisadvantagesA, such as physical and photos of the gap is too wide. Online shopping is only seeing the picture, to the arrival of goods in your hand, you will feel different from real. This is better to buy the rest assured in the Mall, because 100% is real.Second, you need to add postage. In fact, this is not a disadvantage, because you need to go shopping is spending fare. Postage of online shopping it is quite cheap, but some shopkeepers are happy, willing to mail it for you, then you can even earn, 呵呵 ~Third, not to try on. I never agreed with net purchase clothes and shoes. Because the clothes and shoes to try on yourself to know is that all right ~ if bought on the Internet are not appropriate, returns and more trouble to dropping said.Fourth, network payment is not secure. Have heard people say Taobao, Alipay is vulnerable, so I've always been shopping, saving into the Alipay, PayPal money is always empty in peacetime, huh. Not worry about rice is vulnerable, but everything be careful ~优点：一，可大大节省逛街的时间，一边听着轻快的音乐一边享受网上购物的乐趣。而且，还可以把你想要送给朋友的礼物，直接从网上订购后，就能送到你朋友家里。二，可以货比N家。给你一整天的时间，你也顶多只能逛十几家商场，可是在网上，你可以在一个小时内搜索上百家店铺。找到款式相同，而又最便宜的那家，即可下订单。缺点一，比如实物和照片上的差距太大。网购只能是看到照片，到货物真的到达你手里，你会感觉和实物有不一样。这就不如在商场里买到的放心，因为百分之百是实物。二，需要加邮费。其实这也不算是缺点，因为你去逛街购物也需要花车费。网购的邮费还算是比较便宜的，而且有些店主很爽快，愿意替你包邮，那你可就算是赚啦，呵呵~三，不能试穿。我向来不赞同网购衣服和鞋子。因为衣服和鞋子都是要自己试穿后才知道合不合适的~万一在网上买到不合适的，退换也比较麻烦滴说。 四，网络支付不安全。曾经听人说过淘宝的支付宝有漏洞，所以我向来是要买东西了，才往支付宝里存钱，平时支付宝里的钱一直是空的，呵呵。不是担心有米有漏洞，而是凡事都要谨慎~